tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964815528057831199.post5671972693704228930..comments2024-03-16T09:18:24.018+00:00Comments on Fantasy Boys XXX: FB3X Drabble Cascade #6 - The Whisper of Winds (PG m/m)Sophie Duncanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14768033409563305140noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964815528057831199.post-56188486396159718752013-04-19T20:55:57.015+01:002013-04-19T20:55:57.015+01:00I will get to writing some longer stuff once A to ...I will get to writing some longer stuff once A to Z is over and I'm not writing blog posts every waking hour ;PSophie Duncanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14768033409563305140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964815528057831199.post-62221829434543771382013-04-19T02:26:07.839+01:002013-04-19T02:26:07.839+01:00*sigh* Another lovely little bit that has whetted ...*sigh* Another lovely little bit that has whetted my appetite.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964815528057831199.post-8684850170209765592013-04-17T06:36:57.451+01:002013-04-17T06:36:57.451+01:00A few of them have sparked off something that is l...A few of them have sparked off something that is lasting in my brain, so they will materialise. This one had so much back story in my head before I started it was silly, but I have to work on an actual plot ;PSophie Duncanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14768033409563305140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964815528057831199.post-55841932166654987832013-04-17T03:42:34.278+01:002013-04-17T03:42:34.278+01:00Some day you must take these drabbles and make lon...Some day you must take these drabbles and make longer stories out of them. <br /><br />I want to know what comes next. The slow seduction or are you going to torture them first.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964815528057831199.post-87791602108976974542013-04-16T17:13:45.119+01:002013-04-16T17:13:45.119+01:00Thanks.
I agonised over this one, chopping and c...Thanks. <br /><br />I agonised over this one, chopping and changing every single word at least once, and mostly more, because I had such a clear picture in my head and I wanted to capture it all. I'm finding when words are limited that I can do a lot with the reader's inference, i.e. what's between the words that isn't written - I really think drabbles are improving my word skills and I hope it'll come through in my longer stuff :).Sophie Duncanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14768033409563305140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964815528057831199.post-4072681257383695482013-04-16T16:59:37.384+01:002013-04-16T16:59:37.384+01:00Nice. I like how with a few choice words you'...Nice. I like how with a few choice words you've drawn a picture of the boy and his community, also giving a strong sense of things fated to come.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964815528057831199.post-26344975950485860852013-04-16T07:59:56.347+01:002013-04-16T07:59:56.347+01:00Hi, yes, the word was spice :)
Thanks for respond...Hi, yes, the word was spice :)<br /><br />Thanks for responding, I'm glad you liked the drabble.Sophie Duncanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14768033409563305140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964815528057831199.post-87733455218424578082013-04-16T03:20:48.033+01:002013-04-16T03:20:48.033+01:00SO the word was spice? I liked your post about wh...SO the word was spice? I liked your post about what you thought of when you read the word spice. I especially liked the phrase the foolish boy not afraid of strangersAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09068010284145260558noreply@blogger.com